Cranky answer to a Spring is Sprung poem.


A Facebook friend wrote this.  Below it is my cranky answer.


Spring has finally sprung.
Flora begins again to flourish.
There are but few clouds above.
Sunshine warms air and ground.
Gentle breezes play in the trees.
Cool grass tickles beneath toes.
Birds sing happily for you.
In this moment all is well.
What have you to be sorry for?

 

Cranky answer

Spring has sprung
rains flood the house
flora
makes me sneeze
No clouds
to stop sun’s heat
gentle breezes
turn to gusts.
wet grass
messes up my shoes
birds are crows
who screech
not sing
but even in
this moment
bad
I still
write
poems
is that sad
or glad?

 

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